英文作文

會俾塊滿哂倒及牙既唇到佢爆光囉 ~
avery 發表於 2009-4-10 22:42

《小心有牙》咩

真係有牙呀 ~

真係有牙呀 ~




avery 發表於 2009-4-10 23:04

戲黎嫁我講果個
講女人_ _有牙==

小心有牙睇到我好痛

小心有牙睇到我好痛
Exodus 發表於 2009-4-10 23:40

  難道你係臨記?

唔該晒 jellyfishy
(簡單英文, 不要想得太複雜 :I am happy today.)
上次作文,個老師話唔好再用d咁簡單既英文,
用新教個d
~michelle~ 發表於 2009-4-10 18:31

妳女女幾大呀 ? 都幾好呀 !  我囡囡跟住修左少少 , 妳睇吓得唔得 !

  Sunday, 9th, April,2009     Sunny and hot
    This eater holiday, I went to my sister's home to play. My sister was five years old.
     7th of April is my younger sister's 5 years old birthday. I and her mom occupied a birthday party in her home. Her father bought the birthday cake, that cake was very big and beautiful. That day's afternoon, I and her friends played ball games, card games......
       Night, we ate dinner in a restaurant. Today i am still happy.

其實想小朋友有進步 , 真係要睇多 D ,  講多 D ,  小學唔寫都 OK ,   同埋唔好參與佢既 HOME WORK 啦 ,  妳改左 , 老師唔知佢唔識架 !  頭先無追 POST 就比左囡囡打上面篇野 , 原來大意係並咁遠 ~ HAHAHA ~

carlo, 你睇唔出樓主就係當事人呀?

carlo, 你睇唔出樓主就係當事人呀?
jellyfishy 發表於 2009-4-11 00:12

以下是小女作的英文作文,想大家指點下睇下有什麼錯!!thank
Write About You Eeaster Holiday

Sunday 9th April          Sun and Hot
      Easter holiday , i went to my sister home played . My sister was an  ...
~michelle~ 發表於 2009-4-10 18:05

"小女作的英文作文" .... 擺明呃鬼 ~

"小女作的英文作文" .... 擺明呃鬼 ~
avery 發表於 2009-4-11 00:17

係 LAW , 我真係睇唔出 ........

Write About You Easter Holiday

Sunday 9th April          Sunny and Hot
I went to my sister's home and played with her on Easter Holiday.  My sister just turned 5 years old.

Her birthday was on 7th April.  Auntie and I gave her a birthday party at home.  Her father bought a cake, it was very big and beautiful.  In the afternoon,
i and her friends played ball games and card games ......

We had dinner in a restaurant at night.  I'm very happy today.

嘻~唔知岩唔岩呢?

109# avery


我真係信ga, 坦白講, 真係似小2.小3細路寫ge野

109# avery


我真係信ga, 坦白講, 真係似小2.小3細路寫ge野
dada 發表於 2009-4-11 02:43

但係我以為個媽媽為個女 post 架 !  

如果咁會唔會好d?
Write About You Easter Holiday

Sunday 9th April          Sunny and Hot
Today was Katie's birthday. I went to her home and played with her.  Katie just turned 5 years old.

Auntie Mary and Uncle Jason threw her a birthday party.  They invited all of Katie's friends to come. Uncle Jason bought a cake, it was very big and beautiful.  In the afternoon,
we played ball games and card games. Katie won the games most of the times.
We had dinner in a restaurant at night.  I felt very happy today.

真的, 這是香港小二程度英文(開始深)

係,我只係一個小4學生,
因為我d英文差,所以似小2.小3細路寫ge野有咩出奇,
因為咁,所以我先post我作既英文作文比各位指點下,教下我
令我d英文好d,而唔係d咩"擺明呃鬼 "
可能係我打得唔清楚/有人唔會左會意思
ok , 我清楚咁講多次:小女=我=當事人

死得 ... 又多左 一 pad 茄 ... 女茄 ...

michelle 小妹妹, 返學校問下你中文科老師, 自稱有D咩詞語可以用 ... 我都可以好清楚咁同你講多次, 小女≠我,  小女≠當事人 囉 ....

...........

係,我只係一個小4學生,
因為我d英文差,所以似小2.小3細路寫ge野有咩出奇,
因為咁,所以我先post我作既英文作文比各位指點下,教下我
令我d英文好d,而唔係d咩"擺明呃鬼 "
可能係我打得唔清楚/有人唔會左會意思
ok , 我 ...
~michelle~ 發表於 2009-4-13 19:01

咁如果係小4學生, 都唔算好差, 做多d練習改進下囉

Michelle, 見你都識得上網問功課, 係一件好事 (你應該都幾好學)
小四英文都好深下架勒, 你有咩唔明咪再上來問過囉, 好多人都好樂意幫你架!

@@小四學生都會上黎呢到

Michelle, 見你都識得上網問功課, 係一件好事 (你應該都幾好學)
小四英文都好深下架勒, 你有咩唔明咪再上來問過囉, 好多人都好樂意幫你架!
kariek 發表於 2009-4-13 19:53

但係......好似有人唔係咁歡迎我bo